Writing Center Reflection

My writing fellow was Emma Scott Singletery. We spent a long time reading over my literary analysis. She helped me find stronger vocabulary, develop a stronger conclusion, and strengthened my body paragraphs. Emma Scott complemented the best parts of my essay and made suggestions on the parts I could work on. We removed useles sentences and replaced them with longer, well built sentences.  The last thing Emma did was read my essay out loud. This helped us figure ot what needed to be changed. I think this helped my literay analysis a lot. I will probably go to the writing center for future papers because it helped me so much.